Reference no: EM131553053

Assignment: English Optional Rewrite

Choose one on-time essay and do a thorough rewrite. The grade for this optional rewrite, if higher, will replace that of the original. This rewrite must be typed. The due date and time are absolutely final. No late papers will be accepted under any circumstances!

You must do the following:

• include this completed worksheet (essay will not be accepted without it)
• include the original (essay will not be accepted without it)

As you review your rewrite, answer the following questions:

Does the thesis indicate the essay's topic and purpose, make an active assertion and use specific language? Y/N
Is there a clear introduction that grabs the reader's attention? Y/N
Do the body paragraphs clearly support the thesis? Y/N
Do the body paragraphs cover separate but related main ideas? Y/N
Are the supporting examples fully developed with specific details? Y/N
Are there clear transitions between the essay's main ideas, indicating a pattern of organization or development? Y/N

Have you revised any glaring errors in grammar or usage such as the following? YIN (Remember, not all errors have been marked on the original)

• Subject verb agreement
• Verb tense shifts
• Word form or choice
• Run-ons or fragments
• Faulty predication or mixed structure

Do the sentences demonstrate syntactic variety and a sense of "voice"? Y/N

Does the conclusion provide a clear sense of completion? Y/N

Now write a brief summary of the changes you have made for this rewrite: Your rewrite will not be read unless you complete this section).

Attachment:- Social-Network-Essay.rar