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When you respond to your peers' posts, evaluate their revisions. What changes have they made that were effective and why? Which sentences could still be revised and how? Replies are still due at the latest by Sunday at 11:59, but try to get your responses in as early as possible this unit, so the writer can benefit from your evaluation when revising their report.
By controlling what type of material waste enters a landfill, pollution can be kept to a minimum.
Revision: Pollution is kept to a minimum by controlling what type of waste enters a landfill.
Communications and sharing of knowledge will lead to less mistakes.
Revision: Communication and sharing knowledge lead to less mistakes.
Limiting errors made in the construction process will limit waste discharge.
Revision: Less errors made in the construction process will limit waste.
Each one of these people deserve to have a unique house.
Revision: Everyone deserves a unique home.
The energy flow of Feng Shui throughout a space can be affected by sustainable materials.
Revision: Sustainable materials affect the energy flow through a space.