Reference no: EM131184004
Let's use this space as a preparation for our peer review next week. Please respond to the following:
Using the sample essay provided, make suggestions to improve the draft and discuss areas that the student writer did well. For instance, you could discuss any number of elements we examined this quarter, including the introduction, the thesis statement, the writer's voice, how well the draft achieves its purpose, the description and detail, the writer's support for the thesis, the structure, APA style, or even the conclusion.
The following questions will help you successfully evaluate the sample student's work:
What is the essay trying to establish/accomplish? Does it do so in an Excellent, Good, Okay, or Passable manner? Why?
If there is one thing that you could learn from this person's draft and apply to your own future work, what would it be? Why did you pick that element?
Does the support work for the essay or against it? Why?
How strong is the writer's stance? Is there anything you would suggest to improve next time?
Does the essay make a strong first impression? Why or why not?
Does the essay leave a solid lasting impression? Why or why not?
Summarize your general thoughts on the presentation and applaud the best parts of the work.
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How the method represents knowledge and include an example
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Psychological factor is relevant to the perpetuation
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What level of taxation on the rich do you think is fair
: Do you generally believe that raising taxes on the rich is an appropriate approach for reducing economic inequality? What level of taxation on the rich do you think is fair? (Note that we will also consider this topic in the next chapter.)
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What are identified opportunities for improvement
: Apply IOMs six aims for improvement to an experience you or someone you know has had.- How do you assess the experience, and what are identified opportunities for improvement?
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Does the essay make a strong first impression
: If there is one thing that you could learn from this person's draft and apply to your own future work, what would it be? Why did you pick that element? Does the support work for the essay or against it? Why?
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Toyota a huge manufacturing company
: Toyota has built a huge manufacturing company that can produce millions of cars each year for a wide variety of consumers. - Why was it able to grow so much bigger than any other auto manufacturer?
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What is the value of a charge
: What is the value of a charge if taken from 300 V , to 170 V , takes 4.9×10-4 J of work.?
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Detailed mechanism for the reaction of ethyl bromide
: Write a detailed mechanism for the reaction of ethyl bromide with iodide ion in acetone. Draw the transition state for the rate determining step of the reaction. Please work neatly and legibly and explain the steps please!
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Temperature of the ice
: To what temperature must he heat the coin so that its volume of 1.08 cm3 displaces an equivalent volume of water on the surface of the ice? Assume the temperature of the ice is 0.000 ºC.
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