Required format: Essay (2 500 words) Your work must comply with the University’s General Guide to Writing and Study Skills, General Guide to Referencing, and Assignment Layout and Appearance Guidelines. Hey, we received feedback from our lecturer and she thinks the essay has no content in relation to the question whatsoever. I have attached her feedback and the valid points she wants in the essay. Could you please send this through to the person who did the essay and ask him to include the points that the lecturer has highlighted. It’s very important. We don’t want another essay just edit this one and include the points. She also told the start of the essay with bookkeeping is irrelevant. Can you go through her criticism and edit this?

This is a group-assignment. Each group needs to have 2 to 3 members in it. Please organise yourselves into groups. Please make sure that names and ID numbers of all group members are stated on the cover sheet of your submission. As this is a group assignment, each member of your group is awarded the same mark. Working in groups has its pros and cons. I am sure that you will hold constructive group discussions. In case of any disagreements, you will be able to resolve them in a reasonable way. There will be times when you may have to agree to disagree with each other. Invariably different group members bring different skills to a project; it is up to you to make the best of it. I believe one can learn a lot by discussing the issues with one’s colleagues. If you find your group members are “not pulling their weight” or there are problems with any member’s commitment, then please try to resolve those issues amongst yourselves. Open and honest communication always helps.