What is a run-on sentence, English

Assignment Help:

What's a run-on sentence?

A run-on sentence occurs when two or more sentences are joined together without appropriate conjunctions or punctuation.

Compound sentences should contain independent clauses that are closely related to each other. Coordinating conjunctions must be used to join related independent clauses. If the clauses are very closely related, it is possible to leave out the conjunction and put a semicolon in its place. When a writer tries to join sentences with just a comma, it is called a comma splice error.

Examples

1. Harriet Tubman was a slave who escaped to the North where she worked and saved money, she went back to the South even though she risked arrest and helped her sister’s family to escape.

Harriet Tubman was a slave who escaped to the North where she worked and saved money is a complete sentence.

She went back to the South even though she risked arrest and helped her sister’s family to escape is another complete sentence. Therefore, it should be separated from the first sentence. You could correct this by making it into its own sentence, by capitalizing the "S" in "She" and placing a period at the end. You could also keep the two clauses as one sentence and separate them by a semicolon, since they are closely related.

2. Tubman behaved heroically, many people still do not know about her.

Tubman behaved heroically is a complete sentence. Many people still do not know about her is another. In this case, the writer has an opportunity not only to correct the comma splice error, but to make the meaning of both sentences clearer. The second sentence provides information that contrasts with that in the first sentence. The comma splice does not convey this relationship; but simply dividing the sentence into two, while it's grammatically correct, does not improve matters sufficiently.

A better way to revise this sentence would be as follows:

Tubman behaved heroically, but many people still do not know about her.

The coordinating conjunction but joins the clauses in a grammatically correct manner; moreover, but adds information to the new sentence to make its meaning clearer.


Related Discussions:- What is a run-on sentence

British Literature, How would Shakespeares''s originally intended audience ...

How would Shakespeares''s originally intended audience understand and respond to Twelfth Night''s themes?

Sentence check, "I''m sorry, Tom, this item is out of stock"..... Is this s...

"I''m sorry, Tom, this item is out of stock"..... Is this sentence grammatically incorrect(as I have used a comma after the name, instead of a full stop)? Some of the people I know

Literature, Who do you think the "you" the speaker is addressing in the 2nd...

Who do you think the "you" the speaker is addressing in the 2nd paragraph of the passage below? Explain what u see as the relationship between the speaker and her daughter, analyzi

Breakwater made of rough angular quarry stone, a)      Irregular waves wit...

a)      Irregular waves with a period of 12 seconds and H p.rms = 2.1m runup on a beach with a slope of 1 in 100. How many waves will go over the R 2% elevation in a 2hr period?

Analyse, what is analyse a range of print and broadcast advertising and ide...

what is analyse a range of print and broadcast advertising and identify the need that is being targeted?

What is proofreading, Editing and Proofreading Proofreading is the stag...

Editing and Proofreading Proofreading is the stage in the writing process in which you polish your work to make it error-free. All forms of writing are more effective when they

Write Your Message!

Captcha
Free Assignment Quote

Assured A++ Grade

Get guaranteed satisfaction & time on delivery in every assignment order you paid with us! We ensure premium quality solution document along with free turntin report!

All rights reserved! Copyrights ©2019-2020 ExpertsMind IT Educational Pvt Ltd