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Provide an outline or graphic organizer that includes at least four points that will help to support essay's thesis statement;

Include that thesis statement in the outline or organizer in addition to the four supporting points.

Once your ideas are organized, draft body paragraph that can then be revised for my persuasive essay.

Specifically do the following:

? Post an outline or graphic organizer that captures and organizes at least four ideas for your persuasive essay. Be sure to include the revised thesis statement in your outline or graphic organizer. Also, include at least one misconception or opposition point to your argument that you will need to rebut in the essay.

? Post a draft version of a body paragraph that would be appropriate for your persuasive essay.

It needs to sound like a persuasive argument vs informational. The paper needs to be more argument based. The paragraph below is the assignment instructions mentioned above:

INSTRUCTIONS: (The academic essay Assignment in this unit will be a written, cohesive argument for the change in your community or workplace that you have been writing about throughout the course. The Assignment should take the form of a persuasive academic essay, in which you will provide reliable evidence from at least four sources to support the argument for change that you are advocating. You will also need to address a counter-argument or misconception about your topic within the essay, as the ability to do so is a key component of a strong argument. Essentially, the essay will reflect what you have learned about writing effectively, using research, and creating a logical argument to influence an audience.)

Attached is draft paper, written with the instructors comments on things that need to be fixed.

She claims its more informational and it needs to be more of a persuasive argument. My thesis is also very long, so was wandering if this can be shortened to few statements.

See attachment and comments for my topic and a base to go off of.

Attachment:- Annotated Bibliography for Adaptive Changes.rar