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Edit the following three messages by correcting the spelling, grammar, capitalization, and usage mistakes.

--> After talking with you and meeting the sales team yesterday I remain enthusiastic about the possibility of joining your staff as an assistant Account Manager. Thank you for taking so much time too show me around.

In addition to enthusiasm, I would bring to the position strong communication and organizational skills. I certainly understand your department's needs for strong support in the administrative area. Although it was on my resume I neglected to emphasize during the interview that I had worked for 2 summers as a temporary office worker. This experience helped me develop administrative skills and understand the everyday demands of a busy schedule.

Learning about the goals of Upper Arlington Agency and duties of the position have confirmed my desire to work for your organization. In the event that you might need additional information from me, all you need to do is shoot me an email at [email protected]. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

--> It was a pleasure talking with you today. As I mentioned, I am delighted to accept the position of project manager with Innovative Creations, Inc. at the starting salary of $56,000 per year.

Enclosed are the health insurance forms you asked me to com-plete n sign.

I am very excited about joining your company. Thank you for giving me this opportunity, I look forward to start work on Monday, 12/15.

--> Thank you for your hospitality during my interview at the companies headquarters last week I am flattered that you would offer me the computer analyst position that we discussed.

I was offered two job offers during my search. Because my desire to work abroad can more readily be satisfied by another company, I have accepted that job offer.

I deeply appreciate the time you spent talking with me. Thank you again for you're consideration and kindness.

Sincerely,
Shavonna Madison