Thesis statement-description essay about a place

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For my english class, we are writing a description essay about a place. I chose to do it on a park near my house.

This is my thesis statement so far: Mile Square Park is a beautiful place.

I'm thinking of changing it to "Mile Square Park, to me, is one of the most beautiful places in the world." It sounds too opinionated though.

How can I improve my thesis statement? In my body paragraphs, I described the park using the 5 senses. I wrote my essay in spatial and chronological form (First, I described the park [trees, flowers, grass, etc], then the pond, then the playground)

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