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Feb. 10.2016

Ms. P. A. Hurd, president

Hurd Enterprises.

xxx Street

Dear Ms.Hurd:

I am a senior student at xxx University. I write this letter trying to get the UNICEF---The United Nations Children's Emergency Fundfor your consideration of the philanthropic organization you would donate.

The United Nations Children's Emergency Fund is a community that cares about children worldwide. This communityistrying to get these children the rights they deserve, the medical condition they should have, the education chances they ought to receive, the foods and water an ordinary person would take in daily. UNICEF, from its' official websites, clarifies they concern every aspect for children: child survival, education and gender equality, HIV/AIDS children, child protection and child participation. Last year, UNICEF saved millions of children from lack of safe water and medical, offered children psychological support and gave children the access to get educated.

There is a website named "CharityWatch" that provides the charity rating, the activities the charity did last years and the financial detail of this charity. According to this website, UNICEF spends 77% of its budget on the charity programs they provided. This percentage might seem relatively small, but I think this situation is understandable since UNICEF does not aim at one aspect, it pursuing both physical and mental conditions for children, or even bigger, it is trying to change the environment for the children. Some other high rating organizations, like Child Find of America and Children's Defense Fund, these two communities were attempting to do their jobs in their field; one is searching for lost children, and another one is about the children's healthy. The state mission of UNICEF is to provide medicines, nutrition, clean water, gender equity, psychological support and education to children even women. Since those children seemed far away from our life, we might only see them on television. People cared less about these children; that is why UNICEF spend more money on raise fundraising. It pays to get more people involved in this community for adverting.

Things are happening, there are ten thousands of children die every day, it is a fact we cannot witness ourselves, so we pretend like it never happens. Last year, a photo of thedead body of three years old boy distressed the whole world. That three years old boy was from Syria; his entire family were trying to reach the Greek island to get away from the Syrian Civil War. That picture is very touching and soul-searching, as a child, he should have the happiest time in his life, maybe with his family. Everyone who has a happiness childhood would remindhow they spent them time while they were little. I believe if you had seen that photo, you would feel all of the sorrow like I felt that time. They were supposed to have enough food and clean water, toys, carefree life. That is what UNICEF is trying to bring them.

Children are the future, they light up your life, their smile could make you overwhelming. Their laughing reminds you your precious childhood or makes you laugh without any reason. They are young, they are little, and they still have along way to go, which is why I wish you could donate UNICEF, children are unpredictable future. Maybe one of the people received the donation would do big in the unknown future.

Ms. Hurd, if you would take UNICEF into consideration for your donation target, I would be more than appreciate.

Sincerely,

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